She's a fairytale

soundtrack demo

ZOMG THIS IS REALLY NICE!!!!!!!I LOVE HOW IT SOUNDS SO MAGICAL IN THE BEGINNING!!!!AND HOW IT PROGRESSES QUITE SENTIMENTALLY. THE MUSICAL IDEAS WERE WELL DEVELOPED AND HAVE GOOD TRANSITIONS!!REALLYREALYNICE!!!!!!AND SORRY I JUST HAVE TO TYPE IN CAPS!!!!!!!!=) IMMEDIATE 'LIKE"!!!ACTUALLY, I'VE LIKED IT WHEN I SAW THE TITLE!!!!!!=) HAHAHAHAHAHA

-CJ!!!!!!!!!!!

Violins are...out of tune at entrance?? They're also very bright in the entrance. I'm no sound engineer, but it was too striking for me. Also the legatos are not very smooth. Is there any way you can fix that?

The composition: quite nice. The vocal entrance is very effective, I like the extended pedal after that point. :) I think the piano could do more than play block chords at that point, though. Another voice would not be amiss.

The "boom" at the end...hm. I kinda like it, kinda don't. It's a little unique for this piece. I think it's just a tad bit too much. Maybe make it more subtle and more subconscious.

Thanks for sharing! A nice piece indeed. Definitely keep tweeking it for your demo.

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The stardust-ish sound at the beginning is a really fitting way to introduce the theme. I agree with Peter's comment about the odd muffled violin sound near the beginning; were you trying to make the choral climax entrance more dramatic in comparison? The change of pace near the end was very nicely handled.

this really hit me ... have the bells start. We work in a similar style. if this is really just a demo, I feel that much more worth it and worth a lot to work and make a nice long composition. speed variation and the middle section, where all the revealing, especially the like. I can not say this evil creation. You got me.

All nice, short runs.