(Beginner) Need evaluation for my composition

I am a beginner composer. I tried compose a Indian song using Fl studio. I just sing using the a cheap mic. Regarding my composition I feel there is alot of mistakes. Sometimes I could not see it properly as I hear more it become normal for me. I would like to ask help of you guys to comment and advice on this composition so I can correct it. Also please see is it the beat(drum) I choose is suitable for this song. Thanks.

http://www.woofiles.com/dl-277001-ImQbe29K-A.MogaanLessaParvai2.mp3

Hello,

This site does offer feedback about compositions, just there is a section for that, where you upload your music and member comment. this way you won't get much feedback. I will comment about your music, but next time, upload your file with a description and we all could help you more.

I think the mix is very clear, even the voice is well mixed, some elements could be a bit louder like that sort of vibraphone, also some more breaks on the beat, specially the hand-clap, also the bass gets a bit lost in some parts, others are fine.

In FL Studio always put a few empty bars in the playlist at the end, to avoid the last note is without tail like your final string.

Keep it on, is not bad.

Thanks alot for reply. Can u tell me where exactly I must post my song for review next time. Feel kinda lost..

On the very top of this page you see your username with your avatar, at left it says "Upload Music" then select the section and the upload.