What Else Can I Add To My Song

i dont know what else i can add to my song

any ideas on what i can i add to make it look better,

i have no knowledge of music whatsover,

i compose with my heart not knowledge :nod:

http://soundcloud.com/vnhrmth/sad-and-mysterious

violin.mp3

Hello, we have a section where you can upload your music and members give you feedback about your music, up in this page you have "Upload Music".

I think you need to develop a little more, if you have

F,E,D... F,E,C ... F,E,D... F,E,C

that is ok, maybe a new segment like

Bb,A,G... Bb,A,F, ... Bb,A,G... Bb,A,F,

repeat first, then maybe

D,C,Bb... D,C,A... D,C,Bb... D,C,A

etc etc

thanks,i uploaded my song on members section as you said..:-)