p7rv Posted July 31, 2013 Share Posted July 31, 2013 This sounds ok to me but I don't really know if valid. The first beat is the end of the previous phrase, and the sudden change of key is purposeful. I'm worried about the octaves. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.fseventsd Posted July 31, 2013 Share Posted July 31, 2013 In the context of the classical style? No. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
p7rv Posted July 31, 2013 Author Share Posted July 31, 2013 darn. what's the specific problem place though? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.fseventsd Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 The parallel octaves are the problem places. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
p7rv Posted August 1, 2013 Author Share Posted August 1, 2013 The parallel octaves are the problem places. :[ thx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xrsbit Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 ;_; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ComposerByNight Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 (edited) To avoid your octaves, you could delay the G in the bass while maintaining the same harmony. You could even add a passing note (A) between Bb and G. Just an idea! Edited August 1, 2013 by ComposerByNight Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.fseventsd Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 i'd personally make the l.h. | chord rest rest Bb | D G F# Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
U238 Posted August 10, 2013 Share Posted August 10, 2013 Oh man, if that isn't a glaring example of all things terrible. Are you trying to piss off Aloysius? Do you really think you could just get away with that scraggy? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
p7rv Posted August 12, 2013 Author Share Posted August 12, 2013 m. 116 for those who are interested http://www.youngcomposers.com/music/5169/rondo/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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