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https://soundcloud.com/retroboy87/circus

https://soundcloud.com/retroboy87/circus-

 

Hello everyone. I'm an amatuer composer with not much experience composing, but I do know a lot of music theory. Which version of this song do you think sounds better? I challenge you to do a Roman Numeral analysis of this song. Feel free to leave any feedback on this song or any of my other songs.

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The second link sounds pretty monotone. You try to insert interest with novel harmonies but you ignore the accompaniment, the same rhythmic figure pounds out the lower voice the whole piece. Sounds like improv, there are a handful of ideas with little to no development.

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