Demo

Hello :)

Please listen to this demo;;; i'd appreciate all feedback.

[this is in draft form]

beats,

-bleum

More chord variation is one thing, but the ostinato rhythm continues without change for, I think, way too long. 
The singers are out of tune, both sharp and flat depending on the note.
It just sounds so unassuming; I want to hear more happen. I want to feel emotion, rather than be complacent.

Thanks for your valuable feedback.

im going to take each part into consideration and see how I can improve it.

is there anything about the piece that you liked?

-bleum.