BH06 Posted June 5, 2017 Share Posted June 5, 2017 hey everybody ! first of all, I know that my work is far from being perfect. in fact, I did it as a recreation, so, I didn't want to loose time in velocity and mastering correction. It's obiously less worked than my first post ( I invite you to discover it or just hear it again: ). That's why, I'd say that I only share this link by patriotism. Who knows ? maybe It could indirectly lets someone discover my little and very welcoming country and encourage him to come for holidays thank you and I wish you very nice day ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted June 6, 2017 Share Posted June 6, 2017 Pretty militaristic, no? I'm just wondering if that's what you want. To me, there's a difference between patriotic and militaristic. Anyway, it supports the melody nicely, though near the end before the cadential extension, I would do your best to make sure the phrase sounds like it was completed correctly. It sounds randomly cut off before the big ending. The soft part I think could use a change of style, kind of like how the American one leaves its march like quality to go into a more soft-spoken version. Reason being, I just felt that despite the soft sound, the quality of the work didn't really change there. Cheers==--- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BH06 Posted June 14, 2017 Author Share Posted June 14, 2017 You're right Monarcheon. Thank you ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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