Knight's March

A march-style piece, but there's something that I'm missing. Help me with your commentaries, but don't ask about the title of the piece.

Why is it titled Knigh't march???

haha jk jk :P

Nice little piece. But after 50, you lost the structure of the march. Those 16th notes in the left hand detracted from the melody. They are awfully distracting and its like trying to watch a movie and someone is talking to you. It was a bit too predictable. Hmmmm - as far as the piece missing something - i don't know - only you can answer that question.

I'm just a scientific student, not an abstract man, so tell me: what do you mean with "distracting"? (not on my brother's behalf)

i mean just that, its distracting, or detracting from the melody. I even gave a nice little example. If your'e trying to watch a movie (the melody) and someone is next to you talking very loudly, its distracting.

Then I shall use the previous march-style chords. Now I see what's the problem.

The new problem is: I can't find proper, unrepeated, chords.

you dont HAVE to change it, i was just letting you know that it was distracting for me :blush:

So it's just an opinion.