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Evil Castle Grounds

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Hi,

I wrote this piece this week themed around the grounds of an evil villain's castle and I was hoping for some feedback on it.

Thanks.

 

Edited by Sen1

Starts out strong..  Really like where the fuzz guitar comes .. You might consider expanding/altering the chord progression.. you do a bit later in piece, move that forward.   or move to another chord progression, because those chords are intrinsically 'kind of pretty and overused'.. Theres some dissonant notes in beginning, that don't evoke 'evil' to me,  Some great starts/stops.

Your choice of instruments, and phrasing is very decent..  Theres''some great parts in here.

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Thanks for the feedback.

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