September 6, 20178 yr Hi, Just wanted to get a little bit of feedback on some music I scored as an alternative to the score on a scene from 'Beautiful Relics'. Thoughts on how it could be improved, what I'm doing right, what I'm doing wrong? Password is 'showreel' Thanks, Dominic.
September 7, 20178 yr 1:02, Coming from a D major chord, the next F∆7∆9 chord sounds bit off, especially since we came from a C major D major pattern before that which gives the implied resolution to G major. Around the 2:20 mark, the F major vs G major polychord was kind of awkward. I get it, but it kind of comes from nowhere. The only other thing I'd say is that the music, to me, doesn't really reflect a realization, either through harmonic structure or orchestration, especially when she looks up from the album. The atmosphere is really nice though; I like it. Congrats.
September 13, 20178 yr Author Thanks very much! All useful stuff :) Another thing I wonder with this, is if the composition is a bit too busy for the film? And perhaps is the motif overused?
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