November 13, 20187 yr This in no way is intended to ever be performed or reviewed, just a piece to listen to. Heres the score if you wanted to read along. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Sx3nLZjgDl-y0F1ODOQWo4uS5IWiA6Z4/view?usp=sharing Edited November 13, 20187 yr by Brandon S.
November 16, 20187 yr This whole V/vi -> I thing you do is interesting, but maybe a bit overdone, especially since the voice leading is the same every time. This is especially awkward at 2:04 (m. 32) when the moment is undercut by the familiarity with the material. Your counterpoint begins to get a bit rough around the minute mark. Passing tones against a static voice in oblique motion will not be heard as such; it's either a suspension or a retardation and both need to be substantiated. Flutes at 24 could occasionally be in octaves to vary it up, give a bit of range. Interesting bit of hemiola at the end there. I'm not sure what the effect of that is.
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