August 25, 200619 yr i don't really play the piano, and seldom do i compose piano pieces, but, when i get bored, anything can happen. by the way, this is the first piece uploaded onto this website!
August 25, 200619 yr wow, I like this piece a lot. Your use of variations is well done, and teh key change fits very nicely. Well done
August 26, 200619 yr This is very good! Especially since you say you don't play piano, you seem to know the instrument well. You should compose more for piano. :) Great work!
August 26, 200619 yr I see that you have a gift for writing melodies. However, I noiticed some funny things in your piano acompaniment. However I am not quite sure but to staggered chords in close position all the time can give the piece some monotony and some problems in voice leading. However, some things could be done in this case. -use chord inversions.- have 1 inv. when going I - IV for example. -1-bass-2 chord-3 an arpeggio chord sequence. Ex ceg, egc,gce. - use some fast note arpeggio. and a little counter melody could be used at the cadenzas could suit the piece just fine. thanks for sharing greetings
August 26, 200619 yr Author I said i don't "really" play the piano, i play the piano alright, i'm just not very serious about it, never recieved any formal training. thank you guys for such helpful comments, more please!
August 26, 200619 yr i'm just not very serious about it, :D your are not serious about it?what a waste of talent :sadtears:
December 4, 200619 yr Not a bad piece, but the thing that gets on my nerves would be the excess damper pedaling, or it could be a sostenuto. Too much. It clashes the whole song together.
