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My very first composed song

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I liked it -- especially the backing track and the chorus. I think if you changed your verses to include notes other than the root of the chord, it could give them more interest. Also, the key change in the middle was a little jarring. Would it be better if you didn't have the rests in between?

Good job, and thanks for sharing!

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Nice work, man. I'm just not so sure if I would use that heavy guitar as a base if you talking about a rock ballad. It felt a little bit uncomfortable at first but then you get used to it as the song goes by. 

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