November 3, 20196 yr Here the first 47 bars of the first movement of my first symphony! Allegro.mp3 Open for feedback and suggestions! Edited November 3, 20196 yr by Hendrik Meniere
November 3, 20196 yr Sounds dramatic, brooding. The flute and harp part was a nice contrast to the heaviness. One possible problem is that there's a lot of doubling on the instruments. You might want to add more harmony in there, or take away some instruments that are playing. Just a suggestion. By the way, is there a score we can glance at?
November 4, 20196 yr Author Thanks for your comment! 23 hours ago, Tónskáld said: One possible problem is that there's a lot of doubling on the instruments. You might want to add more harmony in there, or take away some instruments that are playing. Just a suggestion. Yeah, I as well think there is to much doubling not giving the pice a more diverse texture. I'll try to add more harmony and take away some instruments. Thanks again for your feedback! 🙂 23 hours ago, Tónskáld said: By the way, is there a score we can glance at? Yes there is, but right now I'm a bit ashamed of my orchestration skills 😅!! Maybe some day I will... Thanks @Tónskáld for your comment!!! Edited November 4, 20196 yr by Hendrik Meniere
March 20, 20206 yr Author @Tónskáld Here with less doubling.This project is gi¡oing really slowly... I'm buissy with other things
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