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Composition: Return to Marmara


Jim Jones

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A sequel to my 'island song', unoriginally called return to Marmara. As usual THANK YOU for listening, and for telling me what you think. (even if you think it sucks!!!) 😃

 

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In the opening measures, the E-F motion in the high register seems a little naked without reverb support, or homophonic support like you gave it in later bars. In those same opening bars, I also feel the Am6 chord doesn't quite have a good effect because of the close spacing on the triad. 
The prominence of the string hits later on in the song, closer to 1:40 is a little unprecedented or led up to... it's a little abrupt. 

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