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...and I end up doing something I don't really don't know.
If any of you can analyse it and give me some feedback, I'd appreciate.

Thank you

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10ths at the end not 6ths. 
m. 7's linear escape tone sounds a little awkward.
mm. 11-12's transfer of the F from bass to soprano is... technically fine, but sounds a little weird.

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10ths at the end not 6ths. 

My mistake. Thanks for point that out.

 

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m. 7's linear escape tone sounds a little awkward.

Not familiar with the term escape tone but I think you're talking about the F in the upper voice. Am I right?

 

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mm. 11-12's transfer of the F from bass to soprano is... technically fine, but sounds a little weird.

Well, I had the fixed melody. I could use another note in the bass, an A for ex (a 6th, for A to F, but them I would have a large leap.

I could also think about creating a 5th that that would result in a tritone (B to F). This one seemed the best choice on the moment. 

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