January 10, 20206 yr Guys, please your feedback / analysis on my new composition. Op.94 https://youtu.be/JZDxENuaYBI Thank you!
January 11, 20206 yr Well, it's nice. Relaxing. Kind of "Mystic Moods" music. You obviously have a command of standard harmonic progression; and cheesy though it might be to some I liked the uplift from C to Dflat. It has a lightening effect. Easy to listen to. No need for analysis from me - the scoring is well balanced, translucent, no point in saying "I would have done (whatever) this way rather than that". Like I might have filled out that D flat section a little more - add voice harmony or something, but no. It's good. If it rains this evening, this is the sort of music I'd love to hear sprawled in front of a fireplace reading or something.
January 14, 20206 yr I like your fearlessness of the inner chords juxtaposed against the implied bass harmony. If there's one thing for me, the unchanging texture began to bother me after a bit, and you should probably have something for your soprano to sing (vowels, etc.). Also, why the 4 bars at the end?
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