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Guys, please your feedback / analysis on my new composition.

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Well, it's nice. Relaxing. Kind of "Mystic Moods" music. You obviously have a command of standard harmonic progression; and cheesy though it might be to some I liked the uplift from C to Dflat. It has a lightening effect. Easy to listen to. No need for analysis from me - the scoring is well balanced, translucent, no point in saying "I would have done (whatever) this way rather than that". Like I might have filled out that D flat section a little more - add voice harmony or something, but no. It's good.

If it rains this evening, this is the sort of music I'd love to hear sprawled in front of a fireplace reading or something. 

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I like your fearlessness of the inner chords juxtaposed against the implied bass harmony. If there's one thing for me, the unchanging texture began to bother me after a bit, and you should probably have something for your soprano to sing (vowels, etc.). Also, why the 4 bars at the end?

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