'gambit' small piece

I wrote this a few weeks ago and

don't have much going on so I figure I post it

I used the piano to contruct it which I don't usually do

I think you could've used more stuff during the breaks, cuz the robotic noise thingy could've used more, well, rhythm noise. Or something, right now it feels like it's too naked imo.

Yeah, I agree that it sounds naked. Not sure where it came from, but its almost

a mockery of how film music always seems to add these big booms and sound design s*** to everything.

Anyway thanks for listening.  🥵

All that glitchy stuff sounds cool and stuff and I'm sure it's fun to include it in your music but is there really a musical purpose behind it?  Does your musical material require it?  I don't know what your musical tastes are but you could be writing something with more essence.  This seems like it's mostly just sound production which I guess is another aspect of musical composition that in some circles is sought after.

There really isn't. I just stuck a block of it in between the string parts.

Was it lackadaisical? Probably. However I thought that sort of egged

me on even more to do it.