Albayrak Posted June 2, 2020 Share Posted June 2, 2020 (edited) the name tells the subject. I respect all your comments. Edited June 14, 2020 by ClasiCompose PDF Last_Waltz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DirkH Posted June 3, 2020 Share Posted June 3, 2020 Thank you for writing this piece. You've really managed to create a dark, 'last waltz' kind of feeling and atmosphere. The combination of oboe and guitar adds to this feeling I think. I am no expert on writing for guitar, so maybe someone else will have something useful to say on this. What I do feel would add to the intensity of the piece is a contrasting middle section. Right now it is only dark, and I think contrasting it with something else (rhytmically, melodically, or harmonically) will bring out your intentions with the piece even more. Example of this (contrast starts at around 1:20): 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Albayrak Posted June 3, 2020 Author Share Posted June 3, 2020 2 hours ago, DirkH said: Thank you for writing this piece. You've really managed to create a dark, 'last waltz' kind of feeling and atmosphere. The combination of oboe and guitar adds to this feeling I think. I am no expert on writing for guitar, so maybe someone else will have something useful to say on this. What I do feel would add to the intensity of the piece is a contrasting middle section. Right now it is only dark, and I think contrasting it with something else (rhytmically, melodically, or harmonically) will bring out your intentions with the piece even more. Example of this (contrast starts at around 1:20): thank you for listening and your thoughts. I'm glad I could convey the feeling. I looked at similar examples. but I missed this. thank you for sharing this nice piece with me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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