June 2, 20206 yr the name tells the subject. I respect all your comments.ย ย Edited June 14, 20206 yr by ClasiCompose
June 3, 20206 yr Thank you for writing this piece. You've really managed to create a dark, 'last waltz' kind of feeling and atmosphere. The combination of oboe and guitar adds to this feeling I think. I am no expert on writing for guitar, so maybe someone else will have something useful to say on this. What I do feel would add to the intensity of the piece is a contrasting middle section. Right now it is only dark, and I think contrasting it with something else (rhytmically, melodically, or harmonically) will bring out your intentions with the piece even more. Example of this (contrast starts at around 1:20):ย ย
June 3, 20206 yr Author 2 hours ago, DirkH said: Thank you for writing this piece. You've really managed to create a dark, 'last waltz' kind of feeling and atmosphere. The combination of oboe and guitar adds to this feeling I think. I am no expert on writing for guitar, so maybe someone else will have something useful to say on this. What I do feel would add to the intensity of the piece is a contrasting middle section. Right now it is only dark, and I think contrasting it with something else (rhytmically, melodically, or harmonically) will bring out your intentions with the piece even more. Example of this (contrast starts at around 1:20):ย ย ย thank you for listening and your thoughts. I'm glad I could convey the feeling. I looked at similar examples. but I missed this. thank you for sharing this nice piece with me. ย
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