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Very nice piece! I can see the inspiration horse racing may give to it as well. If you ever revisit this piece I personally would have put a more lyrical section in the middle where there can still be the recurring motif in the bass but over a pleasant melodic line. though that is just my opinion. 

 

Also are you categorising this piece as A major or D major? the video and title of the post conflict.

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What a fun piece!!! I don't know how I missed it when you posted it on Sunday. It's very lyrical and captivating, especially with the chromaticism and colorful chord progressions. Fine work!

I will echo what @Bradley Scarff says... I think a short interlude with the melody in the bass/left hand would be very tasteful.

But fantastic job nonetheless!

Edited by Tónskáld
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