June 18, 20205 yr Just finished the first movement of my new project. The first movement is introduced by an 8-bar section (slow), follow by an exciting syncopated section. The development involves elements from both sections and goes to a soothing C major slow section, which is interrupted by the syncopated section inspired coda. Please enjoy 🙂 Edited June 18, 20205 yr by Samuel Tang
June 18, 20205 yr Very good ideas and creativity, but for me the piece sounds rushed and at some other points it sounds repetitive. It is okay, the use of consonance-dissonance is pretty nice and your melodies aren't too predictable (which I believe is good) like something I could compose.
June 18, 20205 yr Author 17 minutes ago, Ivan1791 said: Very good ideas and creativity, but for me the piece sounds rushed and at some other points it sounds repetitive. It is okay, the use of consonance-dissonance is pretty nice and your melodies aren't too predictable (which I believe is good) like something I could compose. Thank you for your lovely comment :) What do you suggest to make it less repetitive but has a recognisable melody/harmony ?
June 18, 20205 yr 14 minutes ago, Samuel Tang said: Thank you for your lovely comment 🙂 What do you suggest to make it less repetitive but has a recognisable melody/harmony ? For example in the minute 1:49 change that structure a little bit. Later you repeat it.
June 18, 20205 yr Author 47 minutes ago, Ivan1791 said: For example in the minute 1:49 change that structure a little bit. Later you repeat it. Thank you !
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