Intermezzo for Strings

I wrote this short piece for a documentary which was re-edited after the music was done, so I had to rewrite it in a more fragmented fashion. I kept the original version, though, and I designated it "Intermezzo"--this is what I post now. Comments appreciated. It's available at:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=542604&songID=4477129

I wrote this short piece for a documentary which was re-edited after the music was done, so I had to rewrite it in a more fragmented fashion. I kept the original version, though, and I designates it "Intermezzo"--this is what I post now. Comments appreciated. It's available at:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=542604&songID=4477129

Very nice. The level of reverb was about right too. My only comment is that you might be able to take more advantage of dynamics. It started to pall a bit for this reason around 4:00 where the slow section started. Unvarying, the entries don't make the impact they might. But then, you're the composer, so that's just my view.

I'd like to have seen how the parts were laid out on a score.

Was it a Vsti?

Anyway, great.

Montpellier.

Thanks very much for your comments, Montpellier! Yes, I agree with you about the dynamics. I compose on Sibelius, and it tends to be a bit awkward with dynamics, so I refrain, for instance, from using the cresc/dim facility, without which certain parts just fail to come through in the right way. The score was the other thing you mentioned: so far I haven't posted scores because I haven't installed the component of the software that enables it as yet. I will make up for is asap. Thanks again!