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As the first man did not know


Jan-Peter
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Short movement I might use in a larger piece using texts about Lady Wisdom in the Old Testament. Score is still messy...

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Cool piece!

The thing that stuck out the most to me was the amount of time that all parts were in rhythmic unison. It creates a very specific sound, and if that's what you're going for, then great! But it can also be nice to have rhythmic independence between the parts, whether that be in a polyphonic way or even a more varied form of homophony, with accompaniment that sustains and swirls beneath the main melody line.

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Thanks for your comment, I didn't expect a comment on this anymore but life is full of happy surprises😄 thanks for your compliment and your criticism. Your criticism nails a problem I often fall in to. I often like to focus on one thing, keep one obvious thing consistent throughout. I hope this can bring some comfort and clarity and a bit of a hypnotic effect. But sometimes it gets a little boring and people expect more variety. I guess it's like life: you need to balance things out for the best result. Thanks for listening once again!

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