October 3, 20223 yr Constructive criticism: • Minor detail: beware of the Pedal markings, their end indication sometimes overlap with the starting indication of the next line. • Another minor detail: why all indications end with a dot? Opinions: • The repeated motif is catchy and will really shine in any human interpretation that's for sure. • I like the 8 bars before the M49 & the coda a bit more the rest of the piece :), good job there... excepting perhaps M57-59 that sounded a bit like "Tico Tico no fuba" and which I liked even more possibly. I felt like this was kind of a theme with variations at that point and I would have really loved if you had developed those three bars more, they were great! Good job! Kind regards, Daniel–Ømicrón.
October 3, 20223 yr Author 8 hours ago, Omicronrg9 said: Constructive criticism: • Minor detail: beware of the Pedal markings, their end indication sometimes overlap with the starting indication of the next line. • Another minor detail: why all indications end with a dot? Opinions: • The repeated motif is catchy and will really shine in any human interpretation that's for sure. • I like the 8 bars before the M49 & the coda a bit more the rest of the piece :), good job there... excepting perhaps M57-59 that sounded a bit like "Tico Tico no fuba" and which I liked even more possibly. I felt like this was kind of a theme with variations at that point and I would have really loved if you had developed those three bars more, they were great! Good job! Kind regards, Daniel–Ømicrón. Thanks for listening and giving such a great feedback
October 3, 20223 yr I like it, essentially a compressed theme in variations. Reminds me a little of Beethoven's C minor variations which is also based on a simple stepwise moving harmonic progression (though his was ascending while yours is descending).
October 4, 20223 yr Author 14 hours ago, bkho said: I like it, essentially a compressed theme in variations. Reminds me a little of Beethoven's C minor variations which is also based on a simple stepwise moving harmonic progression (though his was ascending while yours is descending. Yes you got that right. Thanks for listening 🙂
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