November 5, 20223 yr Harmonically, it's 'correct' and not a bad statement of themes. I like the idea of the violin starting on its own and then being joined by the piano. It does feel a bit like a sketch though (maybe it is?) as there's no real singable melody. The themes you have in constant quavers and semiquavers feel a bit square, you could maybe explore some syncopation to liven them up a bit. I would look to introduce a cantabile passage next to give the ear something different to latch onto. Thanks for sharing!
November 5, 20223 yr Author 1 hour ago, aMusicComposer said: Harmonically, it's 'correct' and not a bad statement of themes. I like the idea of the violin starting on its own and then being joined by the piano. It does feel a bit like a sketch though (maybe it is?) as there's no real singable melody. The themes you have in constant quavers and semiquavers feel a bit square, you could maybe explore some syncopation to liven them up a bit. I would look to introduce a cantabile passage next to give the ear something different to latch onto. Thanks for sharing! Thanks for the feedback, it is a very quick sketch just composed in 10 minutes ill have to fix the score. A second cantabile passage is next! Edited November 5, 20223 yr by hw1234
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