hw1234 Posted December 2, 2022 Share Posted December 2, 2022 (edited) Quite a poor score but I decided to post it anyway Edited December 2, 2022 by hw1234 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu s45.custom_score > next PDF s45 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chopin Posted December 2, 2022 Share Posted December 2, 2022 Sounds like you are trying to emulate the classical era style. I think so far you are doing a fine job. I don't have much to add at this point, but be sure that you balance your bass instruments a bit better so we can hear them. Also, will you give the violas a more interesting part? Or are they only going to be used for repeating notes? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omicronrg9 Posted December 7, 2022 Share Posted December 7, 2022 I am repeating myself here Hw, but please don't mind if I insist: articulations and dynamics for your symphony movement project may improve a lot the results you're getting which are decent already. Looking forward to see the full movement! Kind regards, Daniel–Ømicrón. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted December 11, 2022 Share Posted December 11, 2022 (edited) Don't want the review count to be -1 all the time, so I will respond! I find this excerpt having great potential to be further developed to a full movement! The opening 8 bars are good enough, and can for sure be extended! I love the tremolos in bar 15-24! It gives me thw impression of Schubert's Unfinished, at the near end of the first movement! You should definitelt try it more! Keep going and hope to see you present longet and more developed work! Edited December 11, 2022 by Henry Ng Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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