March 16, 20233 yr 3-Flujo-1.mp3 Hola, ¿Como suena? ¿Alguien puede darle consejos? Me recuerda al estilo del Adagio de Albinoni. Gracias Edited March 16, 20233 yr by Alejandro G
March 16, 20233 yr Hello @Alejandro G, Welcome to the forum! What instrument or sound effect is that? I think the sound itself is fine! After 0:45 the flow is better with the sustained chord. But those abrupt pauses and short notes really put me off, like at the beginning or in 1:50. Some of them really sounds like random notes hit. Thanks for sharing and feel free to check other talented members' posts! Henry
April 2, 20232 yr On 3/16/2023 at 11:33 AM, Alejandro G said: ¿Alguien puede darle consejos? ¿Darle o darte? Hola, no tenemos una sección en Español (ni en otros idiomas) y nos comunicamos mayormente en inglés, espero que no te suponga problema, pero si escribes el post en inglés probablemente sea más sencillo que recibas crítica, opiniones y eso. ¡Bienvenido de todas formas, Alejandro! Ahora paso al inglés. The piece itself is a bit monotonous (no dynamics, limited in range, directionless at times), and the ways it uses to break such monotony likely don't work as intended. I'm referring to the abrupt pauses made that @Henry Ng Tsz Kiu also noticed. While I can more or less notice a certain direction at least in the harmonic field, this is not the case of the melody. But I would say it's in the right direction, so my only advice would be keep composing! Kind regards, Daniel–Ømicrón.
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