Gabriel Carlisle Posted April 28, 2023 Share Posted April 28, 2023 (edited) I would love any feedback as I am rather still a beginner in the music field. Check out my other compositions on my Soundcloud https://on.soundcloud.com/CBqfm Edited June 14, 2023 by Zeldz MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu 04 Temple of Varýtita (Day Exterior [Gravity On]) > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted April 28, 2023 Share Posted April 28, 2023 Hello @Zeldz, Welcome to the forum! For me the material is quite beautiful! I like the xylophone-like sound! It's just that the repetition is quite too much and I feel like you can at least cut it half or add more varieties in it like adding contrasting sections or voice exchange. But as this is a game soundtrack maybe just keep it in 4 minutes will be good enough! Thanks for sharing and joining! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel Carlisle Posted April 28, 2023 Author Share Posted April 28, 2023 Thank you! I definitely agree with you on the repetition. I often times do that and its a bad habit. The song itself is actually around 3:50 however i looped it twice with a fade at the end. I will definitely make it less repetitive. Again thank you! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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