Waltz 10

Here is a basic score that I still enjoy even though it's short. Has a catchy melody in the middle that I'm fond of.

Enjoy!

Hey, this is really fun to listen to. I agree, the middle section is very catchy. Your triplet runs are awesome and work really well here. You had some interesting key changing going, and I say interesting because when I get thrown off guard and don't know what I am going to expect next, that means the piece isn't predictable (for me at least). And you know what, your repeat was smooth as heck. I didn't even realize you had a repeat until I looked at your score.

54 minutes ago, chopin said:

Hey, this is really fun to listen to. I agree, the middle section is very catchy. Your triplet runs are awesome and work really well here. You had some interesting key changing going, and I say interesting because when I get thrown off guard and don't know what I am going to expect next, that means the piece isn't predictable (for me at least). And you know what, your repeat was smooth as heck. I didn't even realize you had a repeat until I looked at your score.

 

Thanks for your review your to kind

@HtWinsor, if you have the midi file of this composition, I will do my next nuancing video featuring this piece. Let me know.

51 minutes ago, chopin said:

@HtWinsor, if you have the midi file of this composition, I will do my next nuancing video featuring this piece. Let me know.

 

That would be epic cool heres the midi 

Waltz 10.mid

Hi, Henry

You've definitely levelled up with this piece, it's delightful! Well done! I went straight to my piano to play it. I'm really impressed!

Darren

You should hear the rendering I've done. You won't believe its the same piece! I have a lot of tips for you @HtWinsor, that will level up your composition game.

I like how the introduction clearly leads to the main theme from a motivic standpoint.  I mean that the melodies are clearly related to each other and the main theme starts off as an elaboration of the introductory material.  I think that gives this particular composition more thematic unity which really helps to cement its melodies in the listeners mind.  What I personally would avoid is this part:    The sudden accelerated flourish of notes (especially at a non-homogeneous speed) confuses the listener and is not based on any kind of recognizable melodic contour.  In other words, it seems to be a scale just for a scales sake which is just about the most boring melody one could write.  But the piece does have its strong points besides this and a few other weaknesses.  Thanks for sharing!