sasapwr Posted June 1, 2023 Share Posted June 1, 2023 I wrote this chorale just now. Let me know if there's anything I can improve on! Thank you MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu chorale_3 > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted June 1, 2023 Share Posted June 1, 2023 Hello @lucasa223, Do you have pdf for this one? Since it's a traditional SATB is easier to review it with a score! From what I heard I do find there are some double thirds, like the A major chord with two C sharps in 0:03. It can be fine depend on the context, but for writing in that style is better to prevent it first since it's considered too bright to have double thirds for a major chord. Other than this I will have to check out the score for more detalis! Btw. I have moved your topic to the incomplete forum since the piano music forum is for completed pieces, and the incomplete forum may fit more of your request of advices! Thanks for sharing! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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