January 21, 20242 yr As in title i m working on chamber pop track for my little sister ^^ everything is done in logic pro x so no music sheet so far. 2 different sections that i ll try to fix later in a better pop form. a synth is playing the voice and vst the other instruments( bass cello v1 v2 alto)
January 21, 20242 yr The only thing I may watch out for is your key changing. It felt abrupt and unnatural to me at the 46 second mark. And similarly around 1:04 your key change felt too forced. A song like this doesn't need key changing, but if you feel you must, it has to be more natural, otherwise there will be too much of a disconnect. Unnatural key changing leads to very disrupted transitions in music. My favorite part of the song is at 1:30 when the cello comes in (or is much more audible). But I will say, the overall song is beautiful so far.
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