Unfinished Pop chamber track for my sister

As in title i m working on chamber pop track for my little sister ^^

everything is done in logic pro x so no music sheet so far.

2 different sections that i ll try to fix later in a better pop form.

a synth is playing the voice and vst the other instruments( bass cello v1 v2 alto)

The only thing I may watch out for is your key changing. It felt abrupt and unnatural to me at the 46 second mark. And similarly around 1:04 your key change felt too forced. A song like this doesn't need key changing, but if you feel you must, it has to be more natural, otherwise there will be too much of a disconnect. Unnatural key changing leads to very disrupted transitions in music. My favorite part of the song is at 1:30 when the cello comes in (or is much more audible). But I will say, the overall song is beautiful so far.