Violin Sonatina with piano accompaniment

Here i present to you a piece I wrote in one night amazingly.

I find it a quite a catchy tune. I'm thinking about redoing it as a sonata but eh... when i get the time.

I've performed this at school and i did win an award for it! So i think it's o...k...... er...

Let me know what you think folks!

p.s this is my first composition submitted on to this website... so be nice hehe lol

Violin Sonatina [piano].mid

Violin Sonatina [piano] 01 Piano.sib

Hello there Ricky, welcome to YC

I'll start with what I didn't like first.

The piano accompaniement itself seemed sort of limited, sometimes you only had it playing one note at a time and that sort of made for a hollow feeling in the piece. And alot of times there were some oppurtunities for some great counterpoint, but there wasn't much in terms of that, I would've liked to see a bit more of that.

Now onto the good

I didn't especially find the tune "catchy" per se, but I did find it enjoyable. And the passage starting around 30 or somewhere around that was very nice I thought. The violin writing was well done I felt

Well that's all I have time for

All the best

WiK

the violin part is fine, the piano is okay, could be improved.

6.5/10

Thanks alot for taking the time to listen. And thanks for your critique.

-r

thanks for listening :)

-r

this will help

very enjoyable and expressive piece. the violin part is specially fine. the pizzicato section was a great idea.

wow! that's pretty good thanks again!

thank you for your comment :)