January 12, 20251 yr Hey gang, I just go through the amount of editing I'm willing to commit to this one, today... It's not complete, so don't mind the gaps, or, the statements where I haven't added in dynamics to a part yet. 😅 Just wanting to get some feedback on it's current progress, and anything I might could make changes to, moving forward. Thanks in advance!! Promise with you.pdf Promise.mp3  Â
January 20, 20251 yr Hey Kyle @UncleRed99, It sounds very nice to me. A nice theme and a nice texture. I especially love passages featuing piano and cello. The music reminds me of some lovely Richard Clayderman pieces! The up an octave sign in the bass clef piano at the beginning looks strange for me and you should just notate your left hand an octave higher! The modulation to G minor sounds abrupt to me but it's a work in progress so I guess you will fill in the gap otherwise! Excited to your final product! Henry
January 20, 20251 yr Author 17 minutes ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said: Hey Kyle @UncleRed99, It sounds very nice to me. A nice theme and a nice texture. I especially love passages featuing piano and cello. The music reminds me of some lovely Richard Clayderman pieces! The up an octave sign in the bass clef piano at the beginning looks strange for me and you should just notate your left hand an octave higher! The modulation to G minor sounds abrupt to me but it's a work in progress so I guess you will fill in the gap otherwise! Excited to your final product! Henry  I appreciate it!  I’m particular to the Cello Solo’s too. When my brain-music-box heard them, I got flutters in my stomach!  Regarding the modulation, yes, the current way it’s written was a placeholder for an idea yet to come. Just a very simple Caesura + 3 note arpeggio to have *something* in place during the editing process.  as of now it’s almost fully fledged out. I’ve just been scratching my head with the modulation transition, and haven’t been able to think of a good way to filter that gap as of yet. But I’m confident in everything else around it so far.Â
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