Have a listen, offer critique!

hey can any1 take a listen to our settings?
 

Hello @Display!

I am glad you decided to re-edit this topic and put up your compositions once again even after your discouraging first experience on this forum.  I am no expert on vocal music having myself only really published 2 vocal pieces thus far.  Do you have a score PDF you could upload for the listeners to follow along with?  I know it would help me greatly not only to know the intended words to be sung but also the form and harmony etc.  I do hear some canonic imitation.  Thanks for sharing and I hope you continue to participate on the forum by posting more of your music or reviewing others works!

On 2/22/2025 at 3:26 AM, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

Hello @Display!

I am glad you decided to re-edit this topic and put up your compositions once again even after your discouraging first experience on this forum.  I am no expert on vocal music having myself only really published 2 vocal pieces thus far.  Do you have a score PDF you could upload for the listeners to follow along with?  I know it would help me greatly not only to know the intended words to be sung but also the form and harmony etc.  I do hear some canonic imitation.  Thanks for sharing and I hope you continue to participate on the forum by posting more of your music or reviewing others works!

 

hey i will add a score file for a little setting

since there is a fair bit of accidentals, the software has rendered it in a# major key on the staff

but it should be f major

enjoy!

i hope you can follow along with the audio,

the staffs should be in a different horizontal align, but i think the notes are rendered correctly!