Bagatelle in D flat Major

Piano piece I wrote, any and all feedback is appreciated

Hello @Alt.

Welcome to the forum!

I think you do a good job for keeping it simple by using the beginning rhythmic motive well throughout the whole Bagatelle. I also like the mixolydian sound of the theme! The higher register in 0:40 sounds more ethereal and I like it!

You can also provide a pdf score here so that other members can look into the details of your works more easily!

Thx for joining and sharing your music! You can also look into other members’ works!

Henry

Thanks! I am working on a score at the moment

Db.pdf

Here is the score if anyone’s interested

Hello @Alt,

By looking into the score, remember to add details in it! Slurs, dynamic markings and expressions would add much more flavour to the music! Tempo marking at the beginning is mandatory too!

Henry

Thanks for tips! I’m fairly new to this 

Here is a better score