June 8, 2025Jun 8 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Td9pPZojLKg Hey, I'm 17 and I made this choral piece in 2 class periods and just had its world premiere and I would love some feedback! This piece enters an aleatoric section at the end that unfolds without a conductor. It is designed to gradually evolve from independent, overlapping textures into a shared, harmonious cadence. This section represents a journey from freedom to unity, from motion to stillness, from individuality to communion. The endless cry for answers about what happens after death, until it ultimately comes to an end, so it starts chaotic and ends in unity with no conductor thoughts?
June 18, 2025Jun 18 Hello @TJ Jones! Welcome to the forum! I really love the calm Db major choral music here. I really love the ending with the dissonances, and the suspensions there is so good which do signify your quest and cry for answers. It's amazing that you are just 17 and come up with such heavy quest and sound effect. The only thing I am dissatisfied with it's the applause at the end, since the silence of the music should linger loner before interrupted by the applause!!!! You are clearly talented. Nothing to add and keep going and compose more music! Henry
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