Intermezzo

Hi all .... 

Here's composition that I began a few years back; however, I really never finished to my satisfaction.

So he's my latest version .... all comments/criticisms/suggestions as well pleasantries are welcome.
 

Mark

Hi Mark @MJFOBOE!

I think your individual style really shines in this piece.  In your other pieces, your style can be a bit dense and hard to digest.  It's a bit like Stravinsky in that it's a style one has to get used to.  But once one does, and in this piece especially, it really has its own unique logic and beauty!  The way you extend and repeat your motifs in this piece is a really unique kind of development.  The piece also seems like it's constantly building towards that final chord.  Although I did find it personally a bit lacking, like a whole fanfare finale/codetta could have maybe made it sound more conclusive.  Those are my thoughts.  Thanks for sharing!