Sing It Loud ... a children's song

Once again ... Hi all,

Here's something I've worked on .... it's a children's classroom song.  I plan to submit to the music teacher at my grandson's school.  So some feedback is appreciated.  I might add more refrains ... (original lyrics).

Mark

Hi Mark @MJFOBOE!

I really like this!  I love the Mixolydian simplicity of the melody and the easy to understand lyrics!  Maybe it could use a chorus in another key?  You could build it from extending the ending bit but perhaps in a whole step higher or lower for contrast?  Then you could go to that chorus in between each of the verses.  It would give the singer a little bit of break from having the sing the whole time since there's rests in it.  Great job and thanks for sharing!

Thanks for the suggestions!  Love it.

Mark