TristanTheTristan Posted Tuesday at 08:09 PM Posted Tuesday at 08:09 PM I wrote 2 sonatas, both for the piano. I would like you to see which one is better. No.1 https://musescore.com/user/96214813/scores/26164063 No.2 https://musescore.com/user/96214813/scores/26953141 Quote
TristanTheTristan Posted 22 hours ago Author Posted 22 hours ago 19 hours ago, therealAJGS said: gotta go with the second. Can you write why? Anyways, thank you for the feedback! (I am not saying I like the first better, it is just that I want to improve.) Quote
therealAJGS Posted 22 hours ago Posted 22 hours ago feels better well written, and is faster paced, I just like fast paced songs, I also like how it's kind of more dark? I don't really know how to explain, also, if any of this doesn't make sense, It's probably because I haven't listened to it for a day. Quote
TristanTheTristan Posted 12 hours ago Author Posted 12 hours ago 9 hours ago, therealAJGS said: feels better well written, and is faster paced, I just like fast paced songs, I also like how it's kind of more dark? I don't really know how to explain, also, if any of this doesn't make sense, It's probably because I haven't listened to it for a day. Thank you! It does! Quote
Churchcantor Posted 4 hours ago Posted 4 hours ago I only listened to so far the first few measures of each, and all I can say so far is that both will be competent compositions! I can look at a score even without trying to hear it in my head and tell just by the layout if the counterpoint, part writing is correct, after 38 years of writing music. This is no criticism of you by any means, but the unnatural exaggeration of dynamics in music software programs is one of the reasons that while my paper manuscripts have dynamics, expression marks, and bowings for string instruments, etc, I never mess with these when I enter music into my site, Noteflight. I will revisit these, my interest is perked. You are obviously trained. Quote
TristanTheTristan Posted 2 hours ago Author Posted 2 hours ago In fact, I am not! I was considered as a child prodigy even by my teachers though. Quote
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