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Hi! Actually I just completed roughly half of my piano toccata piece inspired from living near the motor city (Detroit, MI) in my childhood...

I decided to make this toccata piece since I thought the mechanistic characteristics of the genre match well with general images of the motor city...

After writing nearly the half of the piece I spent many days but still have no idea how to develop further the middle climax section...

Could you comment on this piece and give any suggestions how to complete this middle section? I'd really appreciate your help!

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I mean, to me you have enough material to work with already. Are you trying to get out of it to go back to the first theme? It sounds like it's headed there to me. Maybe try and think about getting back to the octave textures. One way would be weaving them in in some creative way to what you have at the end. I would keep the drive going too. 

This piece is really cool, btw! It had my attention immediately, and the driving nature of it is really fun and engaging. Although not similar at all, the style of this reminds me of something I wrote. Take a listen sometime; something I did with repeated textures or whatever might give you an idea. 

Keep us updated, sounds great so far 🙂 

 

 

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