PARALLEL FIFTHS

Here is a scherzo. Enjoy.

My third scherzo:https://musescore.com/user/96214813/scores/28066087

Man, this seems incredibly difficult! This piece seems like an experiment or something, but you have a lot of really cool ideas. It's a bit hodge podge to me, like a bunch of ideas thrown together that don't quite fit or don't transition well. However, like I said, your ideas in this are cool. This would be something if it were my piece that I would take ideas from and build new pieces out of!

Regardless, was a fun listen, even if I didn't quite know how the piano parts would be played in certain spots 😄 

Mr. Tristan... 😅😅

Piggy-backing off of what Henry said; 
I'd urge you to use the visualizer tool that Musescore.com has built into their interactive score window. Here's a screenshot of your piece in the visualizer. 

Idk about you, but that appears to be quite... inhuman to play. 😅😅😅 Almost like the notes written weren't chosen with any rhyme or reason. I look forward to seeing what you come up with in the future. Take your time, and really discover what it is that you want to "say" with your music!