Justin Gruber Posted Friday at 12:51 AM Posted Friday at 12:51 AM Hello everyone, I’d like to share my piece Fumage for flute, oboe, and bassoon as my submission for the Fall 2025 Halloween Competition. 🎃 About the Piece Fumage is inspired by the surrealist art technique of the same name, where smoke from a candle or lamp leaves ghostly, shifting impressions on paper. This piece takes that imagery into sound, with wisps of timbre, sudden bursts, and eerie colorations from the woodwinds. It mirrors candlelight, smoke, and the blurred line between reality and apparition—an atmosphere that fits the surreal and haunting spirit of Halloween. Instrumentation: Flute, Oboe, Bassoon Duration: ~7 minutes Score (PDF) Audio (MIDI) Thanks for listening and I welcome any feedback! –– Justin Gruber MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Fumage(MIDI) > next PDF Fumage 2 Quote
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted Friday at 02:11 AM Posted Friday at 02:11 AM Hello @Justin Gruber and welcome to the forum! Thank you for your submission! I have taken the liberty of editing this post to include the mp3 you uploaded to the other post and I'll delete that other duplicate post since we want you to submit your music as its own dedicated topic so that the members at large can have a space to review it properly. Thanks again for your participation! Quote
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted Friday at 07:29 AM Posted Friday at 07:29 AM Hello @Justin Gruber! Welcome to the forum and thx for joining the Halloween Competition! I really like this light hearted piece which for sure match the Halloween theme. Changing meters, naughty interactions between the instruments, as well as some funny dissonance and oblique harmonic motions. I like in the structure that after reaching Section K the tonality is more affirmed in C major even with some later more dissonant passages, and then more reflective passages before the ending, and then section P brings back the opening. This really gives a narrative to the whole piece. Thx for sharing! Henry 1 Quote
TristanTheTristan Posted yesterday at 10:32 AM Posted yesterday at 10:32 AM I enjoy the chromatism and dissonance. I have found a wide amount of dynamics used, it is neither so simple. I really enjoyed listening to this piece of music! 1 Quote
TristanTheTristan Posted 2 hours ago Posted 2 hours ago Melodies Themes Motives Harmony Chords Textures Form Development Structure Time Originality Creativity Score Presentation Instrumentation Orchestration Playability Execution of Given Challenge Taste 9.5 8 6.5 9.5 10 7.5 8 7 Quote
TristanTheTristan Posted 2 hours ago Posted 2 hours ago Just now, TristanTheTristan said: Melodies Themes Motives Harmony Chords Textures Form Development Structure Time Originality Creativity Score Presentation Instrumentation Orchestration Playability Execution of Given Challenge Taste 9.5 8 6.5 9.5 10 7.5 8 7 I gave a high level of originality because it has very original thoughts, like a beautiful mess. YOU EVEN WROTE A SHORT PARAGRAPH ABOUT THE MUSIC?! Definitely 10 out of 10. Beautiful melodies. ABA is Boring... Quote
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