a weird composition

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The ideas you have written down are very good ,either continue with the structure you have with your peice or use these ideas in variations and what not. it looks like you already set up some variations as well. Sometimes I think when a dotted quarter note that is unisonly played feels a little bit amateur to me.  If you wanna sound professional, definitely fill in those spaces.   Like a downward 16 note run you could use.  The flow and direction of the music is very open and you could benefit from a lot so definitely keep on finding and trying what works best for you anyways good work and amazing work.

Hello again @Tunndy!

Nice ideas!  I think the following parts with 16th notes:

 should be notated as either being in 6/16 (or you could double all the note values and use 6/8).  I've marked the strong beats as red down arrows and the weak beats as black up arrows.  That's at least how I hear the rhythmic stresses in your piece.  Thanks for sharing!