Nutcracker inspired final

nutcracker inspired final.pdfmy submission :3 I'd like to get reviews ofc

Considering this was above your usually level, then you did a really good job here. Fun motif, excellent dynamics and an overall wintery sounding mood! The piece is also very well structured and easy to follow. The only minor criticism I have is that you stayed strictly in key, but I'm pretty sure this was a conscious decision. If this piece hit the 2+ minute mark, I may then press you a little harder to break out of the scale a tad.

Hi @Tunndy!

I think there's a lot of warmth to your orchestration!  I love those shimmering glockenspiel and triangle ostinati.  Some of the things that wouldn't sound idiomatic are the sextuplets in meas. 35.  It's unrealistic for the Harp, 2nd Violins and Violas to enter on a sextuplet off-beat like that.  It would be better for them to play a note on the downbeat as well if you want that to be performed together.  Thanks for sharing and Happy New Year!

Congratulations for showing well, what can be achieved with a full symphonic orchestra! 

Sometimes I joke that a symphony orchestra is a conductor's very special toy, similar to nowadays DAW software where one is able to mix dozens of tracks and special effects (yes, I attended a concert last year where video game music was performed by such a full symphonic orchestra and it was a fun for me to see what sounds could be produced with the natural instruments – even it is not my genre).

But sometimes these enormous possibilities can also become a problem when there are dozens of bars with virtuoso cadenzas and effects, but the audience can no longer follow which musical idea or theme is being played.

That’s why it is important to have a clear structure or even a „simple piece“ already accomplished as the base before the orchestration. Since this is the case in your piece, it is – in my opinion – easy to follow and so enjoyable with the colorful instrumentation, such as the harp and even woodwind runnings in bars 21-24 and the Glockenspiel/triangle in bars 27-34.

The objection that you have remained in the same key is, in my opinion, not a problem for this short piece, which is only a miniature and not a large concerto or symphony.

Having listened so many mashups of Christmas carols the last few days, I feel to hear citations of „O Christmas tree“ and „dashing thru the snow“ in your piece as well, emphasizing the Christmas mood.

Thank you for this enjoyable wintery piece and a happy New Year.