Daybliss - Piano Solo

Daybliss.mid

Daybliss.mid

Hi @Mikayla,

I feel like the key of this piece is rather in G flat major so you should mark the score with a six flat key signature and turn all the B naturals to C flats! For b.31 I'm not sure whether you would want a C flat for the C natural. The accompaniment there can definitely add more varieties. Thx for sharing.

Henry

A charming "twinkle" of a piece which brought a smile to my face.  May only comment is ... I felt the ending had a bit less flair within the context of the composition.  I really like the different feels in the work from "jazzy" to "Bartok".

Mark

9 hours ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

Hi @Mikayla,

I feel like the key of this piece is rather in G flat major so you should mark the score with a six flat key signature and turn all the B naturals to C flats! For b.31 I'm not sure whether you would want a C flat for the C natural. The accompaniment there can definitely add more varieties. Thx for sharing.

Henry

 

@Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Thank you! I forgot to write asking if I had this in the correct key because I was unsure of it and confused with all the flats haha

2 hours ago, MJFOBOE said:

A charming "twinkle" of a piece which brought a smile to my face.  May only comment is ... I felt the ending had a bit less flair within the context of the composition.  I really like the different feels in the work from "jazzy" to "Bartok".

Mark

 

@MJFOBOE Thanks for the thoughtful feedback. I do realize the ending lacked something, but I've racked my brain to come up with something good and couldn't get it to where I really liked it, so I just went with something instead of overthinking it. I am open to changing it if I come up with something better later!

Do you mind saying why it feels like Bartok? I'm curious because I'm not familiar with his work. 

11 hours ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

For b.31 I'm not sure whether you would want a C flat for the C natural.

I like the C nat 😛

Lovely music Mikayla, thanks for sharing!