January 29Jan 29 At 14, Adam talked about summer dreams On the train and he's laughing with me Talkin' 'bout skateboards, his cat, and the girls that he likes I ask, “Have you got someone in mind?” She’s at the all-girls school He says something about loving her smile Suddenly questioning mine بياخد مخدرات و هو بيتعلم سواقة بيقضي وقت معاها He likes a girl, he likes a girl He likes a girl, he likes a girl And I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl, I'm not a He likes a girl, he likes a girl He likes a girl, he likes a girl And I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl, I'm not Used to pretending I'm cool مش ھاقدر أشرح Why my stomach is tangled in blue احساس جدید لیا He’s half-French with a crooked grin Cherry cola, bright on his skin Wasted on some girl who lets him win But why do I feel hollow within? Why am I burning? ما تفوق شوية He’s not your boyfriend He likes a girl, he likes a girl He likes a girl, he likes a girl And I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl, I'm not a He likes a girl, he likes a girl He likes a girl, he likes a girl And I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl F**k that girl.
February 5Feb 5 I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but I'm not really sure why you're posting these here. This is a music composition forum, and you're posting lyrics without music. We can't give feedback on them as music compositions. I think perhaps a creative writing forum would suit your purpose better, and would yield better feedback for you?
February 5Feb 5 Author I appreciate your suggestion regarding the inclusion of instrumental music or vocal performances. The sole reason I have not incorporated such elements is that I am currently unfamiliar with the process of uploading or sharing them on this platform. Nevertheless, I appreciate your input and will certainly consider it in the future.
February 6Feb 6 You can upload whatever files you have by clicking on "choose files" at the bottom of the post box. I don't speak for the forum, but at least for my part I would say you need to post actual music if you want any feedback. Also, when you do, I suggest you consider first whether "Jazz, Band, Pop, Rock" might be a more suitable category.
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