Wednesday at 12:28 AM3 days Linked to the following poem (or a cluster of poem around this in my notes, but this is in the same topic): https://poetrycircle.com/forum/threads/28-criscee.136779/#post-1104086This is a work-in-progress, I ran into a wall with ideas.n115.mp3n115.pdf
1 hour ago1 hr This a very intriguing work ... I love the meter contrast and harmony. Introducing a new theme to contrast the first movement might be the way to go. The introductory material screams in its dystopian feel and needs conflict and then resolution.Mark
1 hour ago1 hr Author Just now, MJFOBOE said:This a very intriguing work ... I love the meter contrast and harmony. Introducing a new theme to contrast the first movement might be the way to go. The introductory material screams in its dystopian feel and needs conflict and then resolution.MarkHeya and thanks! Yeah I've been sitting on this for a bit now, I sort of had the earlier theme make its way too strongly into all new attempts at a new theme. I am not writing for a deadline so I am free to wait until inspiration hits again. Thanks for stopping by!Pyry from Finland.
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